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Blackberry forest II

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Time for some fun with macros again! These beautiful blackberries looked so mouthwatering in the supermarket counter, and I couldn't help myself =P They still had these pretty little flowers on them, all fluffy when looking closely :)

As usual, please tell me what you think about this, amateur or not, I enjoy getting feedback from my viewers! :la:


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What do you think of the focusing? Is it too shallow, or is it just fine? What about the bokeh, is is enough? What do you think of the choice of subject, and what would you have done differently?

All comments and feedback are welcome, also from non-photographers :)



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Image size
3168x4128px 3.73 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 500D
Shutter Speed
13/10 second
Aperture
F/5.0
Focal Length
100 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jun 1, 2011, 4:49:56 PM
Sensor Size
15mm
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:star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

mmm, I think i would of been better if you cleaned this up a bit (took the broken dead flower part off the rest of the berries) it just looks, dirty, I personally wouldn't think too much of this photo, I always say with photography, if i could take a camera and do it, then its not good enough.

Now if this was taken home, stuck under some better light, cleaned up, organized a bit more, and maybe even put in some interesting settings i would of saw it as something that may of taken a while or that i wouldn't of been able to do. But right now I feel you took a photo that anyone with a camera (doesn't even have to be a nice one) could have done.

this was a good start, but to me it doesn't look yummy at all - I have this unyielding need (randomly) to stick these under the faucet <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt=":p" title=":p (Lick)"/>

From #GimmeFeedback

-Lamma